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     Andrew knows four languages and doesn't speak a word of any. His talents are carving pumpkins, washing windows, caring. His fault is caring too much. He cares too much when I don't wear jackets and when I get my feet wet and when I don't talk. He cared when he held my hand and I let him and he cared when he kissed me and I didn't kiss him back. I don't know what he cares about now. Andrew is dead.

     He died two days ago and now his picture populates the papers, the television. It's a picture of him in the hospital, smiling at his mom. She's curled tightly in a metal chair beside him, face turned away. The doctor stands at the end of the bed, his head thrown back, a chuckle trapped in his throat. Andrew is too skinny, dark body outlined against the white sheets of the bed.

     Three days ago they told us over the announcements that Andrew was scheduled to come home within a week.

     The next morning the doctor's found an infection. Andrew left his body when we were eating breakfast in our bathrobes. I think I saw him in my milk, and that he waved at me, called me silly, and then slipped under and drowned.
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First paragraph for the writing done during NaNoWriMo.
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~screaming-sapphire Sep 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is absolutely beautiful. I'll admit, I teared up a bit.
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~jennedy Jun 29, 2012   Writer
Oh, my god. i wish i could say something specific but for now, all i have is i love this, and thank you.
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Beautiful. Kinda aching to read the rest of this.
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